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Jun 11, '08 6:33 PM
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telah terjadi pertengkaran hebat
antara aku, ingin dan tetapi...
dan tampaknya,
hanya waktu yang dapat menengahi ...

*berharap waktu berputar lebih cepat ...

-ams-

*catatan gak penting: akhirnya tak putuskan untuk menggunakan tiga bait pertama saja ... mudah2xan pesan nya sampe, hiks ... proses kreatip yang melelahkan ...

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elis2107 wrote on Jun 11, edited on Jun 11

imassofyan wrote on Jun 11

elis2107 said

kabar terakhir, bus nya malah mogok

butuh tenaga bantuan buat dorong lis? ;)

sdewi wrote on Jun 11

favorite Eva Cassidy nihhhh... sama doonnn...
*replyganyambung*

abridgetoofar wrote on Jun 11

butuh ojek..?

cabekriting wrote on Jun 11

Tol serang?just a thought...

chatfly wrote on Jun 11

err.. jangan lewat tol.. lewat jalan biasa aja.. :D

tessi wrote on Jun 11, edited on Jun 12

TOL JAGORAWI!!!!

*makin gak pantes*

:)))

viio wrote on Jun 12

elis2107 said

seharusnya waktu dapat menengahi...

namun gawat ...
bus nya malah mogok di tol cipularang

Toll Kanci aja.. sambungin sama yang diatas "seharusnya waktu dapat menengahi" ;-D

nozqa wrote on Jun 12

paling pas yaaa...tol palimanan...

puisisj wrote on Jun 12

ah...
tiga baris pertama suka baaaannggettt

peleth wrote on Jun 12

PSK aj neng...., :P

elis2107 wrote on Jun 12

sdewi said

favorite Eva Cassidy nihhhh... sama doonnn...
*replyganyambung*

mau donk satu album ... xixixixi

elis2107 wrote on Jun 12

imassofyan said

butuh tenaga bantuan buat dorong lis? ;)

heheheh, gih sono ke palimanan bantu dorong

elis2107 wrote on Jun 12

abridgetoofar said

butuh ojek..?

dia gak mau naik ojek :((

elis2107 wrote on Jun 12

cabekriting said

Tol serang?just a thought...

mmmm .... rhymenya belum pas say

elis2107 wrote on Jun 12

chatfly said

err.. jangan lewat tol.. lewat jalan biasa aja.. :D

hahahah .... gak ah, teutep mau pake jalan tol
heheheh

elis2107 wrote on Jun 12

tessi said

TOL JAGORAWI!!!!

*makin gak pantes*

:)))

doh, tadi katanya pake cipularang ... dah hampir pas tuh ... kok jd jagorawi .... mmmmph

elis2107 wrote on Jun 12

viio said

Toll Kanci aja.. sambungin sama yang diatas "seharusnya waktu dapat menengahi" ;-D

eh, tol kanci dimana yah? kranji maksud lu?

elis2107 wrote on Jun 12

nozqa said

paling pas yaaa...tol palimanan...

hmmm.... betuk betul betul ... tuh dah tak edit ...
thx noz - hihihihi

elis2107 wrote on Jun 12

puisisj said

ah...
tiga baris pertama suka baaaannggettt

(",) aiih, lalu baris2x selanjut nya gimana? gak nyambung yaaa? hikshiks

elis2107 wrote on Jun 12

peleth said

PSK aj neng...., :P

doooh .... jauh bener nyambung nyaaaa ....rhymenya ngaco ntaaaar ....
heheheheh

nozqa wrote on Jun 12

bwuahahahaaa...kok ga jadi lewat tol, Lis?

elis2107 wrote on Jun 12

nozqa said

bwuahahahaaa...kok ga jadi lewat tol, Lis?

:(( gak jadi noz ... mood berubah total malam ini

leopoldsudaryono wrote on Jun 12

elis2107 said

telah terjadi pertengkaran hebat
antara aku, ingin dan tetapi...
dan mungkin
hanya waktu lah yang dapat menengahi ...

*berharap waktu berputar lebih cepat ...

-ams-

*catatan gak penting: akhirnya tak putuskan untuk menggunakan tiga bait pertama saja ... mudah2xan pesan nya sampe, hiks ... proses kreatip yang melelahkan ...

Don't we all ...
really like the song and your lines

viio wrote on Jun 13

elis2107 said

eh, tol kanci dimana yah? kranji maksud lu?

cirebon jeng.. ;-) kejauhan yaaaa :-p

puisisj wrote on Jun 16

mba... aku tulis ulang ya, di tempatku

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